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Do it on Lang-8, shit-suck-slag. I have repeatedly recommended so for days.
You will obtain much more helpful and friendly advises there.
As you know, you made mistakes in your writings. How many Masudas pointed out it?
It is not because of your fault but for lack of motivation. There is no benefit to do so for Masudas.
For your goal, you must do in right way and right place. I think Masuda is not appropriate place, at least.
You have a point. Thank you for your advice, it'll be a great help. Telling the truth, I didn't expect to get any helpful and kind comments like yours, so now I'm really happy. Thank you again. Have a nice day.
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